2016年山西中考英语作文题目及范文

When I show kindness and help others，I never expect them to repay me．（选择一方观点） In my view，helping others gives me a strong feeling of being needed and brings me happyness．On the other hand，everyone may get into trouble and need help，too．（说明理由）
Several days ago，while I was having a walk in the park，I found a little boy crying．（高分句型）Then I asked him what was the matter，and he told me he couldn't find his mom．Luckily，he remembered his mother's phone number．So I called her immediately．Ten minutes later，the boy saw his mom and became excited．His mom was so thankful that she wanted to buy me a small gift，but I refused．（高分句型）At that time，I felt quite happy because I did something really good．（举例）
All in all，the world needs love and we should be ready to help others without expecting any repay．If you wanted repay，a"Thanks"would be enough．（高分句型）（总结）
【点评】写图画作文时，首先要看懂图画所表达的内容，最好列一下提纲，然后根据提纲进行写作就不会造成离题或偏题，但要注意，文章必须要覆盖整个要点，行文要注意简化，不要拖沓冗长，要使用正确的句子，同时注意，要使用一定的连接词，比如：first，second，what's more，finally等．再者，在作文完成时要注意检查、修改，如果有时间可以先写到草稿纸上，再抄到答题纸上，这样更容易得高分．最后，注意使用一些句型和短语，使整篇文章意思连贯、流畅，方能成就一篇好的作文．